Outfit Items: View
Description: Cute Pride Look










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

| Lolly .Avi!P Ari Koi
byMaelybyPrey
560994

Head & Face

HairEyesHead

Black+ glimpse blue!N KAARI Eyebrow
by2G3th3RbySomeonebyNightLight
6594491208

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

Busty Rainbow BiRLL Rainbow BikiWhite 1s <3
byLiHowlbyLiHowlbyWins
609609584

Accessories

ScalerScalerScalerEarringsDainty HandsActions

Hand Scaler 75%Leg Thigh ScalerShoulder Scaler StudsNails&Rings v1 Permanent Smile
byScalerbyScalerbyScalerbyVirtualTrampbyGothabillyVixbyShiva
449449499669675450

ActionsEyeLashesNecklaces

 expression - smKAARI Volume LasA$.Pride choker
byGothabillyVixbyAchilleStylebyAryStone
554638663

Edited 1163 time(s). Last edit at 07/29/2019 01:38PM by iMoo.

I saw this earlier while making a submission of my own and thought it would only be a matter of time before someone found it. Nice find!
I do kind of wish she was more extra, at least in terms of makeup and other accessories. The choker is a nice touch but you've got an interesting theme going with the boots that really sets a high bar for the rest of the outfit. Kinda missed the mark when taking that into account.
And, of course, I have the same complaint about her proportions as usual. The leg scaler absolutely needs to go. 90% shoulders would also be better, I think. And there are two expression products, so just go with one of those.

B+

I Also notice that i have x2 smiles on too , i think maybe if this does not pass i have to ask for a resub

I agree with iMoo. After the tweaks, she will be fabulous!

B+

The legs are way too thick on this and the feet look exceptionally large. I think you need to find a balance with your scalers and then you'll be flying.

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : iMoo   : Judge          |
|          B+ : Vivace : Judge          |
|          B+ : Sybela : Judge          |

Resub Granted

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Description: changed avatar shoes hair and skin and also removed the extra smile










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

i'm a STARfish ;! Pride Busty
byToupeesbyCeleb
592619

Head & Face

HairEyesHead

-J- Omaiya black+ glimpse blue!N KAARI Eyebrow
byJavabySomeonebyNightLight
6634491208

Clothes

TopBottom2 Duplicates

Busty Rainbow BiRLL Rainbow Biki Tasseled White
byLiHowlbyLiHowlbyEvadon
609609575

Accessories

ScalerScalerScalerDainty HandsActionsEyeLashes

Hand Scaler 75%Leg Thigh ScalerShoulder Scaler $ Kylie Nails Permanent SmileKAARI Volume Las
byScalerbyScalerbyScalerbyEssmebyShivabyAchilleStyle
449449499554450638

Necklaces

A$.Pride choker
byAryStone
663

I actually liked the original being so curvy because of her bust; but she still got that backside so it works. These shoes are better fitting and not so outlandish (although original was unique and interesting). This is a good pride fit

A

I think her body type is still very curvy and sexy without being ridiculous. I'm glad there were changes made there. But I am kind of sad that you toned it down instead of turning it up. I loved the boots and just wanted everything else to be as unique! But since you took it this direction, the tameness looks good too.

A