Outfit Items: View
Description: A lovely chic look for a little fall stroll in the park.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Ash Avatar!F! Diaz Red
bySinderellabyFear_old_reti
980576

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

mm. Aine - NutmeDRV Babe Brows (mm. Obsession...K|DianeAnySkinHe
byMissMayabyMissMayabyMissMayabyKisaTheCutie
681499446989

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

White Ruffle TopY  Basic MilitarFur Jawns
byViolettaEternbyYLBbyKaysii
609554664

Accessories

ScalerScalerEarringsNecklacesDainty HandsSpeks Shades

Hand Scaler 60%Shoulder Scaler Olive Green Earr( unlock my hear~A: Gold Mirror + Up Rayban +
byScalerbyScalerbyTommyDbyMarthabylllAdrianalllbyQLui_51233988
449499496612670515

"Sedulity"

Welcome to Sedulity!!

This is a very good first submission. I'm impressed! I love how you used olive and white. Very pretty combo. I would have to say that the shoes are a little out of place though; they're fur heels. It doesn't go too well with the outfit. I would opt for something without fur on it since nothing else in the outfit has fur. And I also recommend to use a hand scaler of 65%-70% because these are just a wee-bit tiny I do love your head and skin combo too! I'm going to hold off on grading to see if another judge agrees about the shoes. If so, I'll have to see this resubmitted because it's too cute to pass up.

B+

If they will let me resubmit I sure will. Thank you for the feed back. I originally had other heels picked out, but it said they were duplicates so I wasn't sure if they would be ok to use.

Nice thought on the duplicates! If they were plain white, then it's better to see if you can find some alternatives. Most shoes will have similar derives if you know how to find their "sister derives" (if not, we cover that in the rules thread). If it's something more unique, you'll just want to click the duplicate link and see if your outfit is similar to that one. If it's totally different, count yourself safe from any bad grades over that one thing.

Anyway! I agree with Purversity on the shoes and hand scaler. I also noticed the choice in earrings; the brown is great for the pants color imo, but the earrings themselves are a bit too dressy. I think I'd take them off and go with something more simplistic, personally. Otherwise, this is off to a great start! I appreciate your enthusiasm about a resub and the chance to perfect it

B+

May I please be granted the chance to resub?

B+
88.33 %


2 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Purfection : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo       : Judge          |

Outfit Items: View
Description: Resubmitting with different shoes, earrings, and hand size scale.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Ash Avatar!F! Diaz Red
bySinderellabyFear_old_reti
980576

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

mm. Aine - NutmeDRV Babe Brows (mm. Obsession...K|DianeAnySkinHe
byMissMayabyMissMayabyMissMayabyKisaTheCutie
681499446989

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

White Ruffle TopY  Basic MilitarPineapple Gold H
byViolettaEternbyYLBbyWhims
609554664

Accessories

ScalerScalerNecklacesDainty HandsSpeks ShadesEarrings

Hand Scaler 70%Shoulder Scaler ( unlock my hear~A: Gold Mirror + Up Rayban +Goldy Earrings
byScalerbyScalerbyMarthabylllAdrianalllbyQLui_51233988byWhims
449499612670515609

After the granting of a resub, I want to say I really love the changes you made.
I will also say I love the colors of gold and green together! I also love the hoop earrings
much better! I also like the shoes, however,itI feels a little off since it has bows and your top is
ruffled, but I love the improvements done either way.

Overall, lovely submission.

A

You did a lovely job listening to the critiques! I like that you used gold as an accent. Especially on the shoes.
Nice touch!

A

Hey Joc, I'm sorry I didn't respond to your resub request quickly enough. Next time, please message me or ASCII (he might give you a faster response) with your resub request and link the thread in it! The bot doesn't give official grades to a resub without the "Resub Granted" message prior to it, if I remember correctly. But I'll put a grade and see what happens. If this doesn't get a final today, I'll message you and let you know what happens next.

Anyway, I agree with the ladies above! Nice improvement!

A