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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

bye bye love MIRU | Mochi - W
byAudilebyMiru
399499

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

! Rowenas| LuaBrows KD. mm. Starlet - Bl& Poppie ReQ Bro
byTrendibyScarlingbyMissMayabyNhena
6265544991319

Clothes

TopBottom1 Duplicate

I  me. VANITY $ RL Red Bottoms
byRitualbyWysterybyBiri
609719560

Accessories

ScalerScalerAnimated MagicActionsActionsNew Acces.

Combo Scaler S90Head Scaler 95%Full Body Light  Nana EarpiercSmile[PIX]  Eyeliner 
byScalerbyScalerbyLisycbyxTiZy_7116485bySoirbyPixology
499449499598598695

Dainty HandsEarringsChokersSkins & TattooFace PaintFur

 Gypsy Nails( little hoops )!D. Simple ChokeBlack Fishnets RPoppy 2 LipglossY  Sexy NewYear 
byDexybyMarthabyDashingbymeowbyZadabyYLB
598554699664583525

This is perfect! However, the material of the shoe is very different from the attire and feels out of place in this specific outfit.
Another thing is try to use a shadowless/tintless room so not to use a body light and have it part of your final submission. cx
The head scaler isn't needed here either as I tried on the outfit to see what the different was and the head itself is a good size already and fits the body more proportionally wise. The head scaler here made it small, but it's unproportioned for the model's body.

Addition to this: try not to use any facial expressions! I feel those are personal preferences if someone wants their Avi to have a smile or not. c;

Overall, I think this is cute! I'd like to see the shoes changed to ones more fitting of the top and bottom (material wise) and the body light gone—Soir's smile too— to get the results you want for a passing grade!

B+

Ughhh, this is so hot!!!!!! But I have to agree about the shoes. ;c there's no texture to them at all. I would look for other shoes that have a better mesh on them. I'd also agree to remove the head scaler since the head would do alright without it! I don't mind the facial expressions here because she looks absolutely so good with it! But it is a personal preference to have on. Otherwise, I'd loveeee to see a resub of this with other shoes. So beautifully done.

B+

B+
88.33 %


2 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Knixie     : Judge          |
|          B+ : Purfection : Judge          |

I love the feedback! I will submit new looks with these things in mind as well ^^ ♡

Resub granted!

Outfit Items: View
Description: Things I changed for this resub:
- New boots
- Removed head scaler, bodylight and smile
- Removed "Nana Earpierc" cause the creator got deleted

Hope y'all like it!





Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

bye bye love MIRU | Mochi - W
byAudilebyMiru
399499

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

! Rowenas| LuaBrows KD. mm. Starlet - Bl& Poppie ReQ Bro
byTrendibyScarlingbyMissMayabyNhena
6265544991319

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

I  me. VANITY $ RLV| Bella Knee Bo
byRitualbyWysterybyValyaLady
609719666

Accessories

ScalerNew Acces.Dainty HandsEarringsChokersSkins & Tattoo

Combo Scaler S90[PIX]  Eyeliner  Gypsy Nails( little hoops )!D. Simple ChokeBlack Fishnets R
byScalerbyPixologybyDexybyMarthabyDashingbymeow
499695598554699664

Face PaintFur

Poppy 2 LipglossY  Sexy NewYear 
byZadabyYLB
583525

You did very well. Honestly, I liked the others more in terms of length but this pair is better in terms of quality!

A-

This fits much better with the style of outfit!

A