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malandrita LI22 Tangy
bywomuby1li
448504

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HairEyebrowsEyesHead

"Laid wig" inks| LuaBrows KD. La Vie en Rose EMakeup+Lips+Lash
byilltastebyScarlingbyNekoHimebyEpicErin
6755545981100

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|< Fall! EssentiD| Fall Pant |F2!.Clear Platform
byKoyebyDrozzobyDashing
664565699

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Combo Scaler S90nose piercingsYour Boyfriend CAries hair clipsWCrisp V3 | Zell
byScalerbyRedobyWhimsbyRedobyWinter
499499615499637

She's adorable and I love the colors! However, Not sure about the top in this outfit.

If the coat and top were separate I would say just change the shirt but, unfortunately, they're a package deal lol. The top and bottoms are different in "material" in that the top is more silky compared to the bottoms. I like the idea behind putting them together but seeing them, together, it doesn't match up well. One other thing are the shoes.

I didn't say this prior but the heels feel out of place for the theme of Autumn. cx But I see why you used them!

Overall, love the concept and the color scheme. My advice would be to change with the top to fit the bottoms, or the bottoms to fit the top. Personally, I love the pants and would prefer if you changed the top to fit as well as the shoes. I feel that the attention of your outfit are the pants in this case and you should work more off the colors in them. Try selecting one color from the bottoms and playing with the different tones of the color you picked! It'll be fun and you'll never know what you'll create. I'd love to see this as a resubmission!

**Also the hair clips are floating a bit. And I don't mind the necklace used.

B+

I agree with everything Knixie mentioned, the hair clips was what I noticed first actually. I feel like the jacket goes great with the pants but the top less so, too bad it was a package deal. I would also suggest keeping the pants cause they're a unique touch!
I would love to see a reworked outfit of this as well!


B+

I have to agree with the ladies above me. except for two things. 1. You can only change one of the clothing items. So with that being said, I honestly think you could get away with keeping the top and then just exchanging the shoes since the shoes have more of a fashionable tone and are a bit much. Maybe find some creme/beige shoes instead. And just fix the floating clips by the hair! c: , but other than that, that's really it. I'm excited to see how this is resubmitted!

B+

B+
88.33 %


2 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Knixie     : Judge          |
|          B+ : Tekanna    : 1339           |
|          B+ : Purfection : Judge          |

Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1339.

Resub Granted

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Description: So I really like this outfit and could change just one item so I replaced the shoes with beige shoes, so it matches well. Also removed the floating clips and instead added orange shades to match with the cool pants! I hope this is better. ^^










Avatars & Skin

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malandrita LI22 Tangy
bywomuby1li
448504

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

"Laid wig" inks| LuaBrows KD. La Vie en Rose EMakeup+Lips+Lash
byilltastebyScarlingbyNekoHimebyEpicErin
6755545981100

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TopBottomShoes

|< Fall! EssentiD| Fall Pant |F2~A: Beige Heels
byKoyebyDrozzobylllAdrianalll
664565670

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ScalerNew Acces.ChokersFace PaintActions

Combo Scaler S90nose piercingsYour Boyfriend CWCrisp V3 | ZellDiva Sunglasses 
byScalerbyRedobyWhimsbyWinterbyllMsHUSTLAll
499499615637575

I would have gone for another pair of glasses with silver instead of gold to avoid mixing the metals but otherwise it's nice ~
Good resub!


A-

Tekanna hit it on the nose but overall, a much better pairing.

A-