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Original

Changes were made in everything. I also included gold jewellery to match the outfit. I went for fur shoes to match with the fur shawl. ^=^

Also in the image, shawl has some gold lines, but they are actually shimmers. (Please try it on in the shop.)






Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Why Avatar|< Francisca Red
byQTiGiNbyKoye
498699

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

J- Ember black|< Black BrowsSelene-Mortal~Fashion Head~
byJavabyKoyebyRoybyZ3THAR
6635543991319

Clothes

TopShoes

Red Cocktail DreJUCCY Baddie Fur
byValtriniabyJuccy
645499

Accessories

ScalerDainty HandsFurBraceletsPursesRings

Combo Scaler S90 Black Nails P| UrbanGlam| Sh- Gold braceletsBlack Mini BagK! Gold Rings
byScalerbySohonabyPhillyFinestbyRawanbyine5abyKIYMET
499554694664710499

I dig the head and skin combo used here and it goes well with the brows and eyes! ~
I like the thought you had behind tying in more fur into an outfit but in this case it's not doing it for me, it sort of dressed the outfit down in my personal opinion. The fur combined with the hair and dress is almost giving me a colder-whether-going-out-for-a-fancier-dinner vibe Which I don't mind, but that makes it so that the shoes feel even more out of place with the fancy part.
I would have liked to see either a different fur with a necklace and some other shoes or if you're going for that colder-whether-going-out-for-a-fancier-dinner vibe then perhaps some other shoes to match the dress and fur better. The dress looks nice and I like the added bag for this look!

I like the look but I think you could do even better so that's why I would like to see a resub from this!

B+

The head/skin combo is unique but I really dislike the hair with it. Mostly the babyhair. Otherwise, I agree with Tekanna!

B+

B+
88.33 %


2 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Tekanna : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo    : Judge          |

Resub Granted

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There were replacements made in almost everything. ^-^
Also I had to change the shoes & hair because of the critiques.









Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Why Avatar|< Francisca Red
byQTiGiNbyKoye
498699

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

 Teresa Black|< Black BrowsSelene-MortalKirsten Head no 
byBreonbyKoyebyRoybyCherryBird
6645543991264

Clothes

TopTopShoes

Feather Shawl BlRed Cocktail Dre!C Mila Pumps!
byWhiteSelkiebyValtriniabyCleire
730645446

Accessories

ScalerNecklacesEarringsPursesFace PaintFace Paint

Combo Scaler S90[F] Black Feathe[P]Black featherBlack PurseWSANGRIA | ZELLD. Mono - Drama 
byScalerbyFreakOnALeashbypelindenizbySexyVampxxxbyWinterbyDroll
499460462595637692

Dainty Hands

v. Noir Nails
byVei
664

This is a cool resub for the outfit and the model is pretty as well. I like the addition of feather but I wish the purse were feather-like to fit the outfit more since it doesn't, to me, really fit the feather style. And the quality of the necklace and shawl, the feathers, look like they're lacking a bit of quality.

I love the heels you picked too! Although, I think regular stilettos would have worked better for the style of feathers being used. cx

Lovely resub overall!

A-

Oh damn, I think this is an awesome improvement and definitely polished! I personally don't think that the feathers are bad quality but maybe the lace the shawl is a tad bit blurry, very minor though. The buckles on the shoes are gold rather than silver but it's also a minor as well as the head having a more yellow hue than the body. All minors!
Greaatt job!


A