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This one was inspired by my love of Anime and Manga, especially the female succubus/demoness. They were always very intriguing to me and their style so attractive and fashionable! I tried to create a look similar to styles they tend to been paired with. I hope I did it justice. cx











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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

PopDevilish Skin Bu
byThadsbyPrey
501664

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Ghost Bride Hair|< Shivs! Night! Demoness eyesMabel Head
byDareWearbyKoyebyMoonrisebylH20l
663593444989

Clothes

TopShoes

Bimbo Pvc Black hail
byZ3ntinelabyethelred
993928

Accessories

EarringsEarringsScalerSpice GlassesCollarsTails

Deathly pvc earrPvc earringsCombo Scaler S90:0: Manic Tongue[CS] OMG! Choker[CS] Dark Devil 
byespireldabyTrashCan5byScalerbyChilobyCatSciousnessbyCatSciousness
565730499554578609

Nails MulticolActionsHorns

QM.Gel XL!! Sexy Smile ! Black Devil Ho
byMsDanniebylPureEvilbyAmiCat
560499487

I love the anime and manga look that you were trying to go for! I've been kinda going back and forth on this submission for a while now because I'm not sure how to grade this. Like I understand why you chose the avatar you chose, but for someone who is new to the website might not understand the concept of your outfit if that makes sense? But I'm not gonna let that affect the grade, it's just a thought. c: I'd like to start off with the avatar you used. I'm sure you used it cause there probably wasn't much to use out there for an anime type of look, however, I don't like the way it's positioned the body. It kinda makes one half look like she's provocative and the other half of the body just looks like she has to go potty xD and I do see why you wore the tongue, but it would be best to wear it with a different head that actually has an opened mouth since the smile and the tongue don't fit right. I'm also wondering if the top of the dress is good enough quality for it to be on the website, because the pvc texture on it is pretty blurry. :/ I'm gonna say it's a passable, but maybe those other changes that I mentioned might be necessary.

B+

Yaaas, the anime vibes. I agree about the tongue and pose though. I'm also not the biggest fan of the shoes; they just don't feel quite as sexy as the outfit?
I think the creator must have struggled with the boob part of the dress because it's such a stretched area (I mean look at those puppies). Generally, with larger areas that use the same dainty maps, you get this sort of blurred mess, so it turned out okay considering. It's more a critique of their work than yours but they def should have gone over the areas again after seeing how it was affected, lol.

I actually feel inspired to fix up one of my bimbo avatars to work with this; I might do that today and hopefully, before your resub, you can look at it. 👀

B+

B+
88.33 %


2 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Purfection : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo       : Judge          |

Thank you for th critiques! And I would love to look at yours when you get to it xD.

Resub Granted

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Changed: Eyes, lips addon, shoes, Avatar, and horns
Removed: Tongue, smile, original horns






Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

 Anime BimboDevilish Skin Bu
byiMoobyPrey
443664

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Ghost Bride Hair|< Shivs! Night!Moon Opal - F/ MCary Z A/S Head
byDareWearbyKoyebyPreybyLillanez
663593675989

Clothes

TopShoes

Bimbo Pvc Black  BlackBelt - Hee
byZ3ntinelabyLunaVetra
993666

Accessories

EarringsEarringsScalerCollarsFace PaintTails

Deathly pvc earrPvc earringsCombo Scaler S90[CS] OMG! ChokerTongue Black Fan[CS] Dark Devil 
byespireldabyTrashCan5byScalerbyCatSciousnessbyPreybyCatSciousness
565730499578802609

HornsNails Multicol

Devilish Horns -QM.Gel XL
byPreybyMsDannie
491560

I may be biased, but the new avatar is so much better 😜
I love the new shoes, the new eyes and horns are okay! Tbh I really didn't mind what you had for those before but I see why you would change the horns. And I suppose in anime they would be actual eyes instead of just black so x)

A

You definitely are not biased because it really looks better, the positioning of hands is what I am talking about.
I really like this alot more! Great Job.^^

A