October 21, 2020, 1:25 am

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Description:
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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Model $ Sexy
LI22 Tangy
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MilkBot
by
1li
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498
504
Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyes
Head
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M >Twin-Tail B.
!a | LINEAR [BLA
Blue/Green Eyes
Juli Mh+Lashes
by
MilkBot
by
awkward
by
Lillanez
by
Arlet
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662
499
582
1264
Clothes
TopBottom
Shoes
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*LY* Burby Plaid
JUCCY Cheer Skir
Heel+Stocking RL
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SIRENALY
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Juccy
by
MissMaya
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675
554
664
Accessories
ScalerNerd Glasses
New Acces.
Nose Ring With
Earrings
Bracelets
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Combo Scaler S90
School Girl Gla
School Black Rul
Nose Piercing
Hoops Earrings S
Silver Bracelets
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Scaler
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Nahty
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johngate13
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SexyAF
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Adrienelle
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Bracelets
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499
598
627
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579
Necklaces
Dainty Hands
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Cross Necklace
!! Sugar Black N
by
MilkBot
by
lPureEvil
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637
650


October 21, 2020, 10:02 am
Overall, well done!!
**Just now took a closer look. The top and bottoms are different in tones of white which, not bad of course, however, the top has a black outline whereas the skirt doesn't. I think the skirt should be changed to match the top. If difficult, then the top.
I retracted my grade and will wait for another opinion before giving my final grade.
October 21, 2020, 12:42 pm
October 21, 2020, 1:06 pm
Honestly, just put abruptly, this counts as Halloween for me since she looks like one of those slutty student outfits people do. I was going to say you couldâve added a tie but she does have a cross there which makes it look more Christian too. I donât think you needed the nose ring and my only real issue is with the different white tones and the harsh cut of the shirt. The stockings do look a little odd too, despite them being Rll.
Other than that? Good job.
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Other than that? Good job.
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October 21, 2020, 1:44 pm
I agree with knixie the schoolgirl outfit is something one should be careful of because it is easy to get confused as every day or even role-play submission. However, I see what you were going for, but I do feel like it needs something to tie it to this week's theme a bit more. I would say add a tricker treat bag and color change to orange and black. Overall, even with the different shades of white, I think it's passable. Well done.
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