November 22, 2020, 10:19 am
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Avatars & Skin

!D. Careless|Allie5.0Skin

Head & Face

Kiki - Cream D Med Hea


|< Fall Rose Swe . Heels Alexi


Scaler Hands
Combo Scaler S90 Fall Handbag Cf Shor

Edited 121 time(s). Last edit at 11/26/2020 11:00AM by Guest_SedulityGrader15.

November 23, 2020, 4:35 am

I really like this. I love that you chose to go with beige shoes, perfect!

Did you purposely keep the black brows? I wish they were blonde/white. (personal preference). Also personally I am not the fan of the how the sweater looks, I love the color but I wish it was neat and not so crumbled.

Everything looks nice together. Good Job! ^^


November 23, 2020, 8:03 pm

The edges on the shoes has no texture .

The shading in front of th blouse is very marked and poorly positioned.


November 26, 2020, 7:52 am

I think it's a pretty look overall. I like how you carried red and pink throughout the outfit in different components such as the red in the pants and on the lips and the pink on the shirt and down to the bag. I will say that I'm not a fan of the shoes and would like to see them replaced, mostly because of the lack of texture but I also think another color could have been better for this look, perhaps a pink to match the bag? I think it could be lovely. On the contrary of what Rachel said I don't mind the brows being dark, sometimes a bit of a contrast can be very nice. Perhaps a hair with darker roots could make it work even better?
I would mainly want the shoes to be changed but looking at the look overall I'm not too sure if the are other changes that could be needed to really finish the look off. Perhaps play around with the shoes and hair a bit? I think it could look really great with the help of a resub!


November 26, 2020, 11:02 am

I really like this overall. The shoes could use some texture and don't match the bag or nails too perfectly, but I see that those were the items they were meant to match? A lighter nude tone would have been perfect.